The Easter egg Hunt
One superb Easter Sunday morning 4 girls, Cydni,
Kelly, Kerry and Jessica, decided to go on an Easter egg hunt. There were 16 chocolate
eggs in Cydni’s garden. The girls each had to find 4 eggs. Cydni found 3 and
Kelly found 5 so she ate Cydni’s egg by accident! Cydni was as angry as a
shark! All the girls went to get a refreshing drink but not Kerry… she ended up
eating all the rest of the delicious Easter eggs! Next Jessica, Kelly and Cydni
came back to the garden where they found Kerry being sick because she ate 15
eggs! The girls were angry therefore Kerry said, “I’m so sorry I’ll buy you all
an Easter egg each!”
that is a really great story i love the simile you used. where is the prompt " but i couldnt fing the egg....."
ReplyDeleteWell done girls, I'm not surprised Kerry was sick! Excellent simile and great controlled use of punctuation.
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