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Friday 9 May 2014

Heather and Emmanuel


Swiftly, clinging on for dear life, we sailed through scorching sky below the orange sun. The cool breeze was as welcoming as a log fire on a winter’s morning. Grasping the ebony fuzz, I squealed deafeningly as, my loyal friend the giant bee, cackling with laughter dived screaming down, cutting through the air like a knife. Suddenly he stopped millimetres above the Pacific Ocean hovering in mid-air.   Finally recovering from the ‘attempted   murder’  I lowered my hand to the water  and felt  the calm  salty water  against my  skin as his white lace like wings fluttered rapidly under the sun. 

2 comments:

  1. i like the word fuzz

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  2. Hi Heather and Emmanuel,
    This was an extremely clever and powerful piece of writing. Your level of description was outstanding. You started sentences in interesting ways and used some very advanced vocabulary.
    Keep up the great work!

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