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Friday 9 May 2014

Jafna


Good morning and welcome to the six o clock news. I’m Amelia lemon and today... Would you believe it?! A giant bee has just been found in Buckingham palace! John lime has the story.

“Hello and welcome to the queens home where a mutant bee has just been discovered!”

“GOOD MORNING YOUr MAJESTEY, PLEASE COULD YOU TELL US HOW YOU FOUND THE BEE.”

“Well I wouldn’t have FOUND it if it wasn’t for my corgi who heard some buzzing,” She remarked.

“Your majesty the forensics say that it’s a queen bee, so should you move home in case any other bees come?”

“OH, no need they already have!”

(loud buzzing sound…)

THERE’S TODAY’S NEWS. BYE!

1 comment:

  1. Jafna,
    I like the interview and news story approach with the picture prompt. Your use of dialogue is well-done. You left the reader with a cliffhanger - what will happen to the Queen?

    Mrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
    TX, USA

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