Spirit
I always wondered what was in that
cupboard at school but now I wish I never found out.
It all started one rainy
afternoon, when I was at school. I remember going to the toilet but on my way I
discovered, once again, the mysterious cupboard. It seemed so strange, it was
just calling my name.
Out of instinct, carefully
watching for people around, I tip-toed over and twisted the doorknob. As I
opened the cupboard door it flung open, inside was the most unusual beast you
could imagine. Fear. It swallowed me up and I died. My spirit lifted, and three
years later, here I am, sitting in my old bedroom, a spirit.
Oh dear Tina, you looked real to me today! Some good choice of verbs. Read through to check any words missed e.g. now I wish I .... Well done Mrs. Weeks 'alive!'
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