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Friday 2 May 2014

THE CUPBOARD DOOR by Cydni



Last night I had a sleepover with my 3 best friends. They came round at 6:00pm, to unpack for the exciting night ahead! We got ready for bed, Jessica walked slowly down the stairs because the lights were out. She wanted to turn them on … so she opened the cupboard door… and Jessica heard a noise from inside the door.  Next she zoomed up the stairs, and locked the bedroom door. She didn't want to tell us what was wrong. I tried and tried to phone my mum but it wouldn't let me! What was I to do?
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  1. Anonymous2 May 2014 at 14:47

    Oh Cyndi.. I'm scared. Certainly wouldn't be the first time we've dashed somewhere because we're scared would it! When you're writing use the word rather than number e.g. six o'clock. Well done. Mrs. Weeks

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  2. Anonymous5 May 2014 at 13:24

    Hi Cydni
    What a scarey story! You built up the suspense nicely, starting out with a fun sleepover and then changing the mood of your story. I like the way you ended with a question, it made me think of all of the options available to you in that situation.
    Miss T team 100wc

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