One cloudy, dark night a little7 year
old girl called Charlotte heard a loud
bang coming from her bedroom. So she tiptoed up to her wonderful bedroom and
hid behind the door.She heard another bang coming from her cupboard.Charlott opend
it slowly but when she opend the cupboard door something grabed her in.Is it
her brother playing a trick on her? There was devel red blood dripping from the
cupboard.Emma charlotts my was calling her “charlotte dinner is ready”but no
reply “charlott come and get your chicken burger and chips”Still no answer so
mum goes to get charlotte out of her room and finds blood all over the floor
and scream photos everywhere in charlotts room behind her door was scream…
Kerry, This is excellent and so frightening! I love some of the words you have used to create suspence e.g. tip toed, bang and grabbed. I certainly would like to have heard what happened in the end but I suspect poor Charlotte....? Remember to read through to keep it in the same tense.. past for this one. Mrs. Weeks
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My what a terrifying story, and you did a good job conveying the horror of such a scene at the end. Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
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