One blustery night a girl with the name of Emily-Rose
got up, her tummy rumbling. Unfortunately her poor parents hadn’t fed her in
days. She was starving and thought it’d be ok if she just crept silently
downstairs for a snack, she had to make sure that her parents didn’t catch her.
But when she opened the cupboard door…
Ambling down the stairs, Emily’s parents spotted her!
She was going to be in so much trouble…an evil flash filled the room… when
Emily turned around she wasn’t Emily anymore. She was possessed!
“Her soul and body were easy to take over. She is
weak and she is MINE!” growled Emily.
Suddenly she disappeared… only now seen at brutal
murder scenes!
Wow, dramatic! Good use of extended sentences and powerful verbs. Well done Mrs. Weeks
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